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cogs
12-01-2009, 12:56 AM
out of boggling propeller
blades that whip
everything in their path

rise above what vexes
to see the whole map
as the floating vane

hack
12-01-2009, 08:11 PM
You just put me on the door guns of a rising gunship.
I don't know that I should thank you, but, gingerly I will.

Delta40
12-01-2009, 08:20 PM
Its odd but I thought about a lawnmower and the intricate world it destroys in its path!

cogs
12-01-2009, 08:53 PM
those are excellent interpretations, worthy of their own poems... i thought about the one blade i see, in a whirling propeller, that goes much slower, as in an optical illusion.

Bar22do
12-02-2009, 07:03 AM
... or, a meteorologist (placed above what vexes) waiting that that large dust devil collapse...