O, Man! He sighed

[Bar22do]

It took less than an Instant
in God’s Mind.
Worlds appeared to Him :
cohesion,
fusion,
evolution,
even my verse;
he saw how everything dies,
stars and Man.
Oh, Man! He sighed
and resumed Nothingness.

[paperleaves]

WOW is all I have to say. This is remarkable, a brief glimpse into the realm of one creator, the breath, the sigh, the memory!

You did a great job with this :)

[tailor STATELY]

LOL - I wouldn't presume 'Nothingness', but that's just me. :rolleyes: (Up until then you had me.)

[cogs]

humorous; every poem has to end... wish we could do this before writing.

[Bar22do]

Thank you all: Paper! your valuable insight comforted me; Cogs, I admire your overt dislike or it! Stately: did you mean to write "presume" or "resume" (one letter more and the whole comment sounds different)??? (I called NON BEING - NOTHINGNESS), and am happy you liked the rest...

[hack]

Presume to resume, evolution proceeds by transcription errors,
perhaps we are all a slight mistake.

[~Sophia~]

ashes to ashes... I like this poem very much!

[Bar22do]

Hack - we ARE, at least in our illusion, whether mistake or not!
Sophie! - you warmed up my heart!