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haymanali
11-25-2009, 04:10 PM
I dream of your embrace
Under the rosy shadow
Of your scarlet shy lips
Brushing my heartbeat

cogs
11-26-2009, 12:27 AM
touching image of a kiss. i like the scarlet and shyness... the heartbeat is a great ending.

haymanali
11-28-2009, 07:57 PM
Cogs, thanks for your pleasant appreciation.

thepoet777
11-28-2009, 08:52 PM
Very nicely written. I certainly enjoyed it. It captured the beauty and personal-ness of a kiss.

haymanali
12-03-2009, 05:20 PM
Thanks for your nice comment.