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hack
11-24-2009, 11:56 AM
This pine is willful
It will not grow
Tucked in a crevice
Centuries ago

Battered by winds
And crushed by snow
It does not know
What pines should know

It does not reach
For dizzy heights
But hugs the earth
To pass its nights

Dirtbag
11-24-2009, 12:00 PM
That was adorably tragic.

AuntShecky
11-24-2009, 03:26 PM
Forgive me: but I think you mean "crevice" or "crevasse" and the possessive is "its" (no apostrophe.)

hack
11-24-2009, 04:42 PM
You are forgiven, if I am. Thanx