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hack

11-20-2009, 11:35 PM

acacia whispers
it's not my first caravan
silent moon ascends

Dark Muse

11-20-2009, 11:55 PM

This is stunningly beautiful, so much captured within so few words. I loved the atmosphere and the setting of this poem.

DanielBenoit

11-20-2009, 11:58 PM

Exactly what Dark Muse said. Stunning! I loved "acacia whispers".

hack

11-30-2009, 11:56 PM

Thank you both for your kind words.

thepoet777

12-01-2009, 01:29 AM

So much said with so little. Very very nice. I loved it.

Bar22do

12-01-2009, 04:48 AM

And this one is simply perfect, pregnant with atmosphere and meaning...! a pearl..