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Lamar Cole
11-20-2009, 12:13 PM
You make the winter seem like spring.
You make troubled seas calm.
You are the peace within my soul.
You are my warmth when the sky grows cold.

Your heart is my pillow in the night.
Your arms enfold me until early light.
Your breathing is music to my ears.
Thank you darling for oceans of love all these years.

tailor STATELY
11-21-2009, 06:35 AM
Beautiful.

If I may be so bold as to suggest:

You make the winter seem like spring.
You calm my troubled seas.
You are the peace within my soul.
My warmth when the sky grows cold.

Your heart my pillow in the night.
Your arms enfold me until early light.
Your breath music to my ears.
Thank you darling for oceans of love all these years.

Buh4Bee
11-21-2009, 06:23 PM
I like Tailor's suggestions. Hope I am not overstepping any bounds.