Heart of Ice

[Dark Muse]

A heart like
the snow
forever waits

for your breath
warm as the
wind

to melt
this coffin of ice
away...

[ur_shadow89]

simple but with deep meaning... nice, i like it. :thumbs_up

[Dark Muse]

Thank you

[Sampson]

this image of a "coffin of ice" is remarkably potent! nice poem!

[stephofthenight]

I really like this

[Mrig]

hi it's nice poem...I always feel peoms are very personal

only i cannot relate warm quality to breath!

Wots do you say!

cheers!

[Pendragon]

A wonderful little poem