i wanna let it go...

[ahsiam]

it was being too easy;
yet too sophisticated ;
to be in love.


an emptiness was in their back-
torturing them,
ruling them,
luring them...


it was close
closed like a book...
where the pages begged to get ink..
but words were forgotten.
and yet elegent
if antiques on the cover got dusty to be remembered...


he liked the elegance in her,
she loved the white pages..
was being too hard yet too confident
and a silence hovered them both


it was easy to live
it was hard to just be...

[Delta40]

I love how this poem is situated as if it is sliding out of my grasp. Very effective and I really like the lines

he liked the elegance in her,
she loved the white pages.

as if there was world of difference in each others focus and profundity.

[blazeofglory]

I like the poem and really a beautiful account of love

[Bar22do]

I like the last two lines as well as the power of these:

"he liked the elegance in her,
she loved the white pages."

thank you

[ahsiam]

thanks everyone :)