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Sampson
11-15-2009, 12:02 AM
if i was a poet
i would proudly take centre stage
and if i was a poet
i would sit for hours and stare at the page
and contemplate the nature of my verse
before i let even one solitary word stain
the purity of the pulpy parchment before me

and if i was a poet
i would publish my work formally
but equally i would speak it
audibly to audiences of
revolutionaries and freedom fighters
later day intellectuals and midnight writers

and if i was a poet
i would light fires in their minds
remind that poetry is about more than rhyme
that poetry is about reason and
achieving something deeper than reaction
and if i was poet
i would to teach them that acting
and posturing is lost on those
who know the feeling that poets capture
while mere mortals are in rapture
at the way metaphors encapsulate feeling
we don't realise that pure genius
manifests itself in the words
the world is built on

and if i was poet
i would write a folk song
just to evoke images of longs nights
spent high on bob dylan's prologue
to our collective misspent youth
and if i was a poet
i would strive to right the truth

if i was a poet
i would stay true to my poetic roots
suitably abuse my walking boots
and spend the rest of my life bunning zoots

if i was a poet...
but as it stands i'm just one man
lost, wandering the badlands
with a pen in his hand

Bakiryu
11-15-2009, 12:08 AM
wow! i love this.

(*btw, you misspelled the world realize in verse 3)

Sampson
11-15-2009, 10:03 AM
thank you Bakiryu... and by the way, in England we don't spell realise with a 'z' (:

The Walker
11-15-2009, 12:37 PM
I LOOOOVED this, so honest, so touching.
I loved the last lines of this stanza





and if i was a poet
i would publish my work formally
but equally i would speak it
audibly to audiences of
revolutionaries and freedom fighters
later day intellectuals and midnight writers



And loved the last stanza as well.
You may be a man with a pen, a proud man with a pen in his hand
:)

subterranean
11-15-2009, 01:34 PM
English is my second language so I ask this just to confirm my understanding, isn't the title suppose to read ''If I were a poet?''

Sampson
11-15-2009, 03:16 PM
Thanks guys...

Ans Subterranean, the grammatically correct title would indeed read "if i were a poet". However the title is not grammatically correct, and purposely so in order to reflect my own speech, and that which ha influenced me.

kevinthediltz
11-15-2009, 03:24 PM
I loved it. So honest and raw.

I have to admit though, reading the title, I thought of the song "If I Had a Million Dollors" :lol:

That aside, a wonderful poem.

paperleaves
11-15-2009, 09:04 PM
I adore this...especially "if i was a poet.../but as it stands i'm just one man/lost, wandering the badlands/with a pen in his hand"
I love it , I love it, I love it!

love
paper

Sampson
11-16-2009, 02:55 PM
Cheers guys... Kevin, which song to you mean, because there are a few with that title?

Pensive
11-17-2009, 07:01 AM
Now all I can say is wonderful! :)
The only problem is you aren't just a man, you are a poet! :)

loki456
11-17-2009, 07:09 AM
indeed.... this left me with goosebumps. nice work mate.

ampoule
11-17-2009, 08:33 AM
One man, one poet, is all it takes.

Pendragon
11-17-2009, 08:57 AM
One voice crying in the the wilderness of life

Sampson
11-17-2009, 05:23 PM
guys, your praise is disproportionate to the poem i feel... but maybe that was the point to the poem?

cogs
11-17-2009, 06:10 PM
it is ironic, that's true. i see your desire for expression displayed here. i think the badlands you wander are great inspiration... perhaps the aspiration is to write about greater things, but the mundane is just fine with me.

~Sophia~
11-17-2009, 07:50 PM
Wow... how did I miss this! It's great for all the reasons already cited!

Sampson
11-18-2009, 02:22 PM
thanks sophia! i really am kinda overwhelmed by the response to this... though it does highlight the fact that a poet simply writes words... they're not a true poet until they touch their readers hearts and minds

stephofthenight
11-18-2009, 09:11 PM
I realy enjoyed this fliud peice... I would totaly say you are a poet...