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Biggus
11-14-2009, 04:57 AM
LOVE HAIKU # 1

Under skies of grey,
or beneath a sky of blue,
I would love you still

LOVE HAIKU # 2

Should the clouds obscure,
the glorious stars at night,
I will still love you

LOVE HAIKU # 3

Wondrous chemistry,
electricity crackling,
when boy meets a girl

LOVE HAIKU # 4

The science of love,
physics meets biology,
when boy meets a girl

blazeofglory
11-14-2009, 07:13 AM
I like this idea physics meeting biology and a fusion of two contrasts. This makes thing beautiful. And of course when we kind of fuse things that are supposedly hard to fuse. This is a kind of new use, new experiment with poetry. Such poetry does not bore us in a while. I generally do not like the stereotypes who simply follow a track.

I hope you will come up with more and more such strikingly beautiful poems.

Biggus
11-15-2009, 02:48 PM
Thank you so much