patient parent

[Delta40]

Find your way to me
on an overcrowded bus
prattle along to a stop unknown
the eyes of strangers
and music in your head
will keep your thoughts company
I wait patiently for you to arrive
in the timeline of the young
transformed into woman

[blazeofglory]

Beautiful, really beautiful!! I like particularly:

"the eyes of strangers
and music in your head
will keep your thoughts company"

You use this image amazingly. I can visualize it and find it a wonderful use.

[firefangled]

This is a lovely poem. I just had dinner with my daughter this evening. Lately I realize she has arrived through the transformation.

Thanks for sharing this.

[Virgil]

Very nice Delta. This is a really good little poem.

[~Sophia~]

I've raised a young woman. This is perfect!

[Delta40]

Thank you everyone for your beautiful comments