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hack
11-12-2009, 04:35 PM
turning now from dreams
flaming sunrise slowly dies
pancakes for breakfast
:D
Sampson
11-12-2009, 05:45 PM
haha, that's an awesome haiku man!! Love it!
blazeofglory
11-14-2009, 07:21 AM
Wow! you said so much things that go at times unsaid even if people write volumes after volumes. People have little time for voluminous and lengthy poems these days and such short and crisp poems that can be read at one sitting is really greatly palatable to us.

I hope you will entertain and enlighten us with more and more such poems!
hack
11-14-2009, 04:21 PM
thank you and fare well
irony's not lost on me
sense, I fear, is gone
Buh4Bee
11-14-2009, 04:49 PM
Very amusing!
Haunted
12-20-2009, 02:53 AM
Wow! you said so much things that go at times unsaid even if people write volumes after volumes. People have little time for voluminous and lengthy poems these days and such short and crisp poems that can be read at one sitting is really greatly palatable to us.

Totally agree. Less is more.

If more stuff is written as economically as this, I would be reading more. Long, drawn out lines turn me off.