LOVE (free form prose)

[blue_danube]

I'd just like to say that I am a Lithuanian and English is not my first language.
I enjoy writing in English because of how expessive it is. I hope you enjoy what I have written Despite the errors.


LOVE



This is the only thing that I want to believe in, to be attached to it. it is so perfectly mirrored to our unexplainable illogical chaotically reality, that sometimes seems to repeat it’s curves, folds and whatever it’s called stupidity or wisdom.

That’s why I feel that it’s real. Because of being so slimy. it’s more than the dry term, it’s something which is common to the human race, something that we are being born with.almost like a white code. Which helps us to be warmed up standing in the gates of the split worlds, uncovering, shining just in front of our eyes, ears or drifting, vibrating and breaking beyond.

More or less, however strong or weak felt, it creates the vibrating web, the thread and the connection.. like a huge vein connecting limbs and heart it connects individuals, by pumping energy and making them feel the purpose.

Drowning in the light, swimming in the warmth of the spring, this is how it feels. Bringing closer to the CREATOR, who made and encoded us with the will of searching for it, experiencing, living in it, trying to prolong and believe it’s eternal existence.

Just one more thing.. it’s only the belief, which might be a total bull**** and part of twisted reality or the numberless lie.
But ..still, I feel like it is something which is really eternal, transmitted from generation to generation, making us purified and more clear to ourselves, facing our own flaws, while looking for those which we notice in others.

I imagine it like a divine light, being born and raised in between.

thanks for reading it. doesn't matter either you liked it or not, you did a great favour for me. you thought of love, this couple minutes, while you read it.
and this is all that matters.:wave:

[lenryuka]

"That’s why I feel that it’s real. Because of being so slimy"

I don't get a very positive feeling when I read the word "slimy". Im not sure if that's what you wanted, but it doesn't feel like it relates to the rest of the writing.

However, your main idea is great, please do keep writing!

[James_Patrick]

Despite the errors in grammar (as english is your 2nd language these are easily forgiven) I liked the idea. I hope I understood this story correctly. He seemed that you were saying love was wild and dangerous but overall worth it. I believe this is true in any language.
I liked this peice and would enjoy reading more of your work.

[blue_danube]

i appreciate your comments, thanks for taking time and reading my prose. The main idea of this short text is that we are all connected by love(plus air and divinity:)..and numberless other things).
what is interesting to me, that we don't know where it came from or why it exists. but despite the possible answers, it makes our life bareable, sometimes - even beautiful. and i think as far for the future generations love will be one of the crucial factors, which will influence our existance on the earth. the question is,will we have enough of it..?

[atiguhya padma]

Blue Danube,

interesting. I used to feel like that. I used to think that truth was indescribable, ungraspable, inconceivable. So for me, the harder a thing was to define, the more real it was. But alas, that is the way to all kinds of nonsense and irrationalities. Ephemeral qualities do not make anything more real. Love is indescribable. Love is different things to different people. Love is a personal construct. It has a history. It is a poetic, creative fabrication. But it is a fabrication nevertheless. We have given this fabrication a life, placing all kinds of emotions and passions onto its vagueness, its ambiguities. Love is like category mistake. Yet it is still important, something to value and cherish, just as any positive illusion is.