~Avian Flu~

[DanBierce]

The crows
have fallen ill today,
as crap blows around
the Studio 7 dumpster
to ruin the Bandido's view.

Their motorcycles,
parked along the sunline,
lean slightly
like the crows
who have fallen
ill today.

"We're sorry,"
says the SODO Association.

We should have known
the crows were due
to caw-in sick one day.

It's been
in all the papers,
and now the Bandidos

have been caught
selling hotdogs
without a permit.

And here, it's begun to rain,
but down comes the tarp,
their bun's only protection,
with no one to eat them,
because the crows
have fallen ill today.

[Virgil]

:lol: Yeah, this works. Very humorous. I don't usually care for repetition at the end as a summation, but here I wouldn't read it as a summation but a final poke in the ribs. Very good. :D

[cogs]

wow... this seems quite original. it's like a snapshot from a city... i wonder the significance of what is on the surface.