Log in

View Full Version : Blessed



Lamar Cole
11-07-2009, 09:21 AM
Our love is written in the stars.
Illuminating the universe from Mercury to Mars.
Our love is floating in the sky.
Dancing above the clouds so high.

Our love is sung by the wind.
Echoed by the thunder.
Caressed by the rain.
A thing of beauty and wonder.

Our love is touched by the sun.
Blessed by God.
Etched in the heart.
Destined to last forever from the start.

Virgil
11-07-2009, 09:39 AM
I'm sure your girl friend will really love this. :)

blazeofglory
11-07-2009, 10:11 AM
Love is so much heightened in importance here that it moved me beyond limits. Poetry of this quality where in passion is profuse is rate these days, and this reminds me something of the Wordsworth type where nature man works in touch with nature. It is really beautiful and amazing and I personally like this kind of poetry. Poetry must be full of emotion, and natural stuff and it should not be too much politicized that makes it dry and un-soothing. Poetry has more to do with heart than brain and I like this poem for the reason that it has more heart contents.

cogs
11-08-2009, 11:51 PM
wow, blaze, i have never heard you to be so vocal (textual?). i agree with you, and thank you for more clues to popular poetry.
i also liked the last stanza.