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haymanali
11-06-2009, 09:14 PM
I wish
I could become
A blue breeze
Softly brushing
Your sweet smiles

Through my diaphanous dreams
Vanishing like transparent rainbows

MorpheusSandman
11-06-2009, 11:18 PM
Variegated rainbows is a bit redundant, but other than that I like the simple elegance of the piece.

haymanali
11-09-2009, 01:22 PM
Thanks for your valuable suggestion.