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Dark Muse
11-03-2009, 08:18 PM
Fortified

You are
silence
in a dark room!

In the distance
a clock ticks
mounting tensions
with each finger-
stroke

waiting to
crack
wide open
the old wounds.

I stand
holding back
the flood gates
of torrent
emotions.

A typhoon
string
beneath
the surface

You brought
chaos
in the world
and now
wait!

You prepare
to unearth
yourself
tremors
in dawning
moments

but it's
imperative
I drive the
stake down

lance through
your heart
and leave you
bleeding!

There can be
no mercy
you and I
were never
made for friends.

It is all or nothing
your chucked
the all
so I will take
the nothing.

I will watch
your die
a thousand times
before ever I
grant you life.

My will
must be
iron clad
there is no
in between.

You would
pour yourself
into me
only to break
out in broken bones
and shredded flesh.

So I stop
you cold
and throw back
your tears.

No longer
my shame
I absolve
responsibility
from your pain
and snuff mislaid dreams
coming far too
late.

cogs
11-03-2009, 08:41 PM
wow emotional... i would like them to have time to interact more... i like the tension, and wonder what they had together, if it was personalized or generalized.

Dark Muse
11-03-2009, 08:53 PM
Thank you very much. It was a very manic, bi-polar relationship

skib
11-03-2009, 09:00 PM
Very powerful.