convinced

[cogs]

i hate your
pecking kisses
stupid staring
stinking perfumed letters
relentless ringing
saccharine singing
idiot intimations
weak whispers;
i'll condescendingly caress your ugly face
and look patronizingly into your lackluster eyes
while standing closely to make my point that,
i hate this kissing...
i do...

[tailor STATELY]

Harsh. Poignant and harsh.

I can feel the vitriol in your prose. Well done.

Thanks for the music link. I'm a songwriter in the bud (scored 1-short Primary (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Primary_(LDS_Church)) Song from one of my simplest poetic compositions). I am sorely in need of 'music theory'.

[Buh4Bee]

Your emotions are clearly communicated. I don't think you r ideas could be any more straight forward.