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cogs
11-01-2009, 11:56 PM
warm pancake spoke stuffed sweet endearments,
sand scratched love notes surf caressed smooth,
stifled heard heartbeats dealt folded hands-
seasoned key, unlock between us,
this wood door facade that
mutes morse code desperation,
hollows intimate hope,
false answers our future; let
snowfall impart numbness,
glade sunbeams spot separation,
frail wind exhale frustration,
woo her to unshut her soul,
reveal my face repainted
by romantic candlelight;
know me beyond our barricades

paperleaves
11-02-2009, 04:57 PM
holy hell.
this is almost as if...your pons exploded, and all the seeping fluids created something so beautiful, incomprehensible, and serene (perhaps even a bit disturbing) all at the same time. THIS IS INCREDIBLE.


<3
paper

cogs
11-02-2009, 08:12 PM
that's high praise coming from you. at first i thought you meant 'puns'... lol. i enjoy reading yours because i must use a dictionary.