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Dark Muse
10-27-2009, 08:26 PM
MOON
night's eye
Harvest red
in October skies
winking down from heaven
her lofty celestial throne
"burning bright her spirit fire"
Short and sweet! Very nice, Muse! Your poem inspired a different view of the moon for me (which says something, having written a few poems to her myself!)
Dark Muse
10-27-2009, 08:37 PM
Hehe thank you, yes the moon is often my own muse.
MorpheusSandman
10-27-2009, 11:36 PM
Jung would call this synchronicity... I was actually working on a piece where one of the quatrains was about the moon! I like the beauty and simplicity of this one; nice work DM.
Dark Muse
10-27-2009, 11:38 PM
I am rather influenced by Jung's ideas, thank you for the comments.
firefangled
10-28-2009, 10:26 AM
I like the way these lines build to the last. Beautiful poem, Muse.
Dark Muse
10-28-2009, 01:20 PM
Thank you
Pendragon
10-29-2009, 08:11 AM
To say a lot with few words is to me a special kind of poetic genius, and Muse, you have stepped up to the mark and scored a bullseye!
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