A sweet dream

[haymanali]

I’m still seeing
These rainbow winged
Docile doves of love

That softly wander
And beat the wing

Between my heart
And your azure eyes
Through my dreams

[Pendragon]

These rainbow winged
Docile doves of love



Love these lines, they give that peaceful easy feeling!

[paperleaves]

I agree, Pen, these lines:
"These rainbow winged
Docile doves of love"

are intense, beautiful images.
You truly have a way with words. Thanks for sharing!

love
paper

[haymanali]

@ Pendragon

@ paperleaves

Thanks a lot for your valuable comments.

[Delta40]

I always appreciate so much beauty in such a small space!

[MorpheusSandman]

This is a perfect gem of a poem. One of those pieces that manages to capture one of life's poetic moments in so few and pristinely chosen words and lines. Excellent job.

[haymanali]

@ Delta 40

Thanks for your beautiful comment.

@ MorpheusSandman

Thanks for your sweet words.