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Wade-newb
10-23-2009, 10:58 AM
I'm stuck in here.
Inside this predicament.
Caused by your anger.
Fuelled by my pain.
All joy of today has vacated.
It wont come back tomorrow.
You'll lash out.
Take his side.
Without remorse.

Twist the events, the words.
To suit your argument.
But congratulations.
For you've based yourself on deception, and deceit.
You're an empty shell of your former personality.
The reaon for your truth.
Is a lie.
It's non-existant.

And neither are you.

Inside a web of your own mistakes, you're caught.
The more you garner fury, and be so self-righteous.
The web becomes thicker.
You get pulled deeper.

And as you go down, so my life goes up.
Up in flames that torment unconsolably.
So one day ends, with anger, hate gone from your side.
Come tomorrow, and once again in your heart it resides.
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Another rant/poem, sorry :P
Just letting out my frustration.
Maybe eventually I'll put a real poem up.

MorpheusSandman
10-23-2009, 06:45 PM
Yeah, I was going to say this sounds more like a rant than a poem. Sometimes that's what we need to do; but to make it interesting for others you might find a more poetic voice to frame your rant in.

Delta40
10-23-2009, 06:49 PM
call it pranting! I can relate

Wade-newb
10-24-2009, 01:30 AM
Yeah, I was going to say this sounds more like a rant than a poem. Sometimes that's what we need to do; but to make it interesting for others you might find a more poetic voice to frame your rant in.

Thanks for the help! :) Tis much appreciated.

Wade-newb
10-24-2009, 01:34 AM
call it pranting! I can relate

Haha! Pranting it is then. :)