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DanBierce
10-23-2009, 08:30 AM
Her bullwhip whirls in the kitchen air
as a cow looks with disapproval
at the leather-clad milkman and madness
just inside the door.

Mom's yellow head dims the sunrise
on days like this. With my report card in hand
she ransacks mementos sent by dad
for a pen to initial grades of failure.

Joe, the plumber pulls into the driveway,
readies his snake and plunger,
but they'll remain unsoiled.
Our neighbor'll never finish mowing his lawn.

A cat shrieks. The sparrows splatter
against potted plants. A sewing machine
bursts, sends needles flying through the house
as the Cessna's fuel explodes, turns my sisters

into single-parent children. I get shipped
to Michigan to live in a house acrid with
Ancient Age and a piano in decomposition
beneath an oil of trees aflame.

Delta40
10-23-2009, 08:44 AM
Wow - I love this. It is a like a monumental disaster - a 9/11 to disrupt the domestic bliss of a child's world.

~Sophia~
10-23-2009, 05:50 PM
Is this a true story Dan? Or a just a fantastic poem? If it's true, OMG, how awful for you. If it's a bit of imagination... well done!

MorpheusSandman
10-23-2009, 06:53 PM
Yeah, it's quite original. I like how you paint such a quaint, everyday picture which is so violently interrupted and destroyed for ever. Why the stanza break after turns my sisters / into single-parent children?

DanBierce
10-24-2009, 08:30 AM
Thanks, guys. Glad you like the poem. No; this isn't reality-based. I wrote this after spending an hour or so viewing Salvador Dali paintings online. They put my head in a wierd place, and this poem was the result.

I probably did the stanza break at "turns my sisters" in order to maintain the four-line stanza construct.