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thinkingsam
10-22-2009, 10:55 AM
Hey everyone. This is my first poem in over a month; I'm back after taking a relatively long break from poetry. Enjoy!


A Pace Beyond (http://thinkingcities.blogspot.com/2009/10/pace-beyond.html)

i found her sigh a pace beyond
her eyes a breezy by
and larger skies they trace they face
the music gently cries

its river gems the valley cut
her polished heart from rock
a shielded wall a stony keep
possessions under lock

and keener sight than mine i know
my humble self has found
a glade within the forest green
a young a joyful sound

her laughter tear-singed growing last
the storms beyond the gloom
a shaded patch a garden path
a flower tries to bloom

-Sam, 2009

blazeofglory
10-22-2009, 11:18 AM
Really beautiful and absorbing!