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letdowns
10-19-2009, 11:06 PM
she lies on the floor
gasping for breath between sobs
she wishes things would have ended differently
she wishes that she could let go of her regrets
she wishes she wasnt as scared of life as she is
she ruins everything good in her life
and you were the best
cogs
10-20-2009, 01:36 AM
it's a good start... the image of the girl not able to pick up herself... the change of person at the end