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Farah786
10-18-2009, 02:20 PM
A moth to a flame .....
I knew.....
Burn baby, burn......
Yes still, it flew......

Burnt, scolded....
wounded....
Never to fly again.....

The flame continued....
For another moth...
To fall prey again....

hahahahhehehehe

PrinceMyshkin
10-19-2009, 01:06 PM
Interesting how that final


hahahahhehehehe

turns what I assumed to be the moth, into the flame... but it left me somewhat uncertain what might lie behind the flame's intentionally malicious nature.