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Lamar Cole
10-16-2009, 05:12 PM
Our eyes met.
Our souls touched.
First love is a feeling that you never forget.

First love brought to my heart.
A flood of emotions.
Beautiful and wide.
Exciting like a balloon ride.

Years go by and days pass.
But the memory of a first love will always last.
This is something that must be realized from the start.
A first love always remains in a secret place in the heart.

Dark Muse
10-16-2009, 06:31 PM
A very touching poem there is a bitter sweetness behind it, for the blissful moments are bond not to last, it is a very rare thing when a first love, also becomes the last love.

Pendragon
10-17-2009, 08:58 AM
Our souls touched.
First love is a feeling that you never forget.



Words with a solid ring of truth touched by wistful feeling...