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Altruisms Bane
10-04-2009, 12:34 AM
Thought I'd give this a go with just a few poems. There's no real theme among them, just a random collection.
______________________________

Incarnate

I am disappointment
and bitterness
loneliness
solitude
I am discontent
apathy and anxiety
I am hatred and anger
I am wrath

incarnate

I am gay.

______________________________

The Creed of Reliability

I will not rely on the competence of another.
To thrive is to succeed,
to succeed to not fail;
failure is a collaborative effort.
I may know myself, I cannot know others.
I will not rely on the competence of others.

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The Individual and the Collective

I am unique
We are all unique.
I am not unique.

We are omnipotent.
I am not.
We is omnipotent.

Pendragon
10-04-2009, 07:33 AM
Incarnate

I am disappointment
and bitterness
loneliness
solitude
I am discontent
apathy and anxiety
I am hatred and anger
I am wrath

incarnate

I am gay.



I liked this one up until the last two lines. Somehow "I am gay" doesn't fit into the rest of the poem...

~Sophia~
10-04-2009, 05:15 PM
I do understand (I think). I have several gay friends and at some point in their lives, they felt this way. A disappointment to their parents and/or family, the "why me" thing before acceptance. It is a brave poem. I like it very much.