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AuntShecky
09-28-2009, 04:21 PM
Over the weekend, political speech-writer and language maven William Safire passed away. It’s best to let the experts assess Mr. Safire’s ideological legacy, but on the topic of our living English language, he was a valuable commentator. In his book, Coming to Terms (New York: Doubleday, 1991) Safire exulted in the power of words, and talked about language in a witty, entertaining way.

He found delight in the lexicography and word histories, which, in a way, was a history of the people who first coined them. For instance, the word “Yankees” (which for some reason is on the minds of many East Coasters today) did not originate with the song, “Yankee Doodle.” One of his New York Times Magazine columns reprinted in the book features a letter from a London reader: “Yankee came from the Dutch, who referred to the English in New Haven (Connecticut) as Jan Kees, their version of John Cheese. . .” an earlier version of “John Bull,” a personification of Britain, similar to America’s Uncle Sam.

Safire was a great defender of using words in the right way, though he occasionally seemed to be a descriptive rather than prescriptive grammarian. Columbia University professor Diane Ravitch once lamented how the teaching of grammar had become “outré.” “It is now dogma among teachers of writing that student papers should never, never be corrected for minor details like grammar, spelling, punctuation, and syntax;” she writes, “to do so, goes the predominant wisdom, is to inhibit the student’s ego and interest in self-expression.”

In his reply, Safire foresees how modern technology with its spell-checkers and grammar-fixers would undermine the need for students actually to learn how our language is constructed. He says that the “strawman-educators” might think it is not important, “and when it is, let the machine do it for you.” He goes on to divide knowledge into three types: for survival, for achievement, and for pleasure. Safire argues that the third kind “offers us intellectual and physical kicks.” Additionally, he asks a “philosophical question: “Do we learn only what we have a need to know?” and answers it: “Knowing how things work is the basis for appreciation, and is thus a source of civilized delight.”

That’s why Safire was not worried about knowledge for achievement becoming “available for easy purchase rather than by hard learning.” “We'll break our heads over abstract art, and try to learn about the intricacies of music, and plow the fields of grammar not to show the damn machines we're smarter than they are, but to satisfy our human yearning for the pleasure of understanding.”

America has always needed thinkers like William Safire. He will be missed.

blazeofglory
10-27-2009, 07:20 AM
Grammar is what gives me strains

Paulclem
10-30-2009, 01:05 AM
I am of a generation that wasn't taught grammar at school in England. It has been a great disadvantage, and I had to learn it late as a teacher. I could write, but did not know what was wrong with a sentence when it didn't sound right, and so I couldn't fix it without a rewrite.

The greatest disadvantage it gave me was in languages where we had had no formal grammar teaching, but was then presented with lots of grammar terms in French that I didn't understand.

I teach grammar now, and I think it is essential and interesting, but needs work to teach it in a meaningful way.

Madame X
10-30-2009, 08:29 AM
He found delight in the lexicography and word histories, which, in a way, was a history of the people who first coined them. For instance, the word “Yankees” (which for some reason is on the minds of many East Coasters today) did not originate with the song, “Yankee Doodle.” One of his New York Times Magazine columns reprinted in the book features a letter from a London reader: “Yankee came from the Dutch, who referred to the English in New Haven (Connecticut) as Jan Kees, their version of John Cheese. . .” an earlier version of “John Bull,” a personification of Britain, similar to America’s Uncle Sam.
They also stole, or rather, adopted, ‘Santa Claus’ from ‘Sinterklaas’ (formerly Sinte Klaas), audaciously displaced the celebration day and then turned him into a fat sleigh-riding ‘ol geezer who likes to hang out in chimneys, or something. :santasmil

Paulclem
10-30-2009, 02:51 PM
They also stole, or rather, adopted, ‘Santa Claus’ from ‘Sinterklaas’ (formerly Sinte Klaas), audaciously displaced the celebration day and then turned him into a fat sleigh-riding ‘ol geezer who likes to hang out in chimneys, or something. :santasmil

The Chimneys thing comes from the original St Nicholas in Smyrna who threw gold coins down a chimney for the dowries of a poor man's daughters. The coins landed in stockngs which were hanging up to dry - or so the legend goes.

Virgil
10-30-2009, 07:19 PM
I loved William Safire. He truly was a delight to read. I had a blog in memoriam for him when he passed away. You can see it here: http://www.online-literature.com/forums/blog.php?b=8977.


In his reply, Safire foresees how modern technology with its spell-checkers and grammar-fixers would undermine the need for students actually to learn how our language is constructed.
He was absolutely right. I can't spell any more since computers.

blazeofglory
10-30-2009, 10:41 PM
Grammar is a very tough read, and it has always been a great challenge to me when it comes to grammar. What I have written has never been grammatically correct. I have gone through books on grammar boosters and yet I could not over come some of the common mistakes happening in my writing. As I am a Nepali the single most difficult thing when it comes to constructing sentences is using appropriate articles and prepositions.

Now I do not care whether or not my sentences are grammatically correct as far as what I write communicate what I want to say to my readers. Of course get my writings edited and that correct my mistakes.

I am not detracted even if I am too poor at my grammar. I enjoy creativity. I do write in both languages at the same time, for Nepali is my mother tongue and I can express complex thoughts through Nepali, and mostly I copmpose poems in Nepali. English is a learned language and I do write essays, particularly thoughts-provoking essays in point of fact. Since I read English novels hungrily I have learned enough to express my thoughts through English too, and steadily I have overcome some of the problems I have been facing with regard to communication.

I am disparately on the lookout for a good book of grammar that help me to improve the basics in grammar. As a nonnative writer in English I am kind of facing too many problems with common errors in my writing, the kind a native writer never face and that native writers are innately possessing that skill.

Of course to be a successful writer in English, a language that has always been foreign to me despite the fact that I always read things in English, I must own a good book of grammar. I know I can not naturalize English, that is impossible, but at least I can make my writings readable.

Paulclem
10-31-2009, 04:30 PM
Grammar is a very tough read, and it has always been a great challenge to me when it comes to grammar. What I have written has never been grammatically correct. I have gone through books on grammar boosters and yet I could not over come some of the common mistakes happening in my writing. As I am a Nepali the single most difficult thing when it comes to constructing sentences is using appropriate articles and prepositions.

Now I do not care whether or not my sentences are grammatically correct as far as what I write communicate what I want to say to my readers. Of course get my writings edited and that correct my mistakes.

I am not detracted even if I am too poor at my grammar. I enjoy creativity. I do write in both languages at the same time, for Nepali is my mother tongue and I can express complex thoughts through Nepali, and mostly I copmpose poems in Nepali. English is a learned language and I do write essays, particularly thoughts-provoking essays in point of fact. Since I read English novels hungrily I have learned enough to express my thoughts through English too, and steadily I have overcome some of the problems I have been facing with regard to communication.

I am disparately on the lookout for a good book of grammar that help me to improve the basics in grammar. As a nonnative writer in English I am kind of facing too many problems with common errors in my writing, the kind a native writer never face and that native writers are innately possessing that skill.

Of course to be a successful writer in English, a language that has always been foreign to me despite the fact that I always read things in English, I must own a good book of grammar. I know I can not naturalize English, that is impossible, but at least I can make my writings readable.

The articles and prepositions are usually the most difficult for writers who are of a second language. I teach lots of second language speakers to write, and they invariably trip up on these. I must say, though, that you don't do too bad in your posts Blazeofglory.

One of the problems with grammar is so much is open to interpretation. In teaching grammar, for example commas, I am faced with a phrase in a grammar book that says something like - "In the previous sentence you could use a comma before the conjunction - or not."
This is no good if you are dealing with supposed rules, and very unhelpful for students. It is worth working with the grammar - seeing what works and guiding your writing with that until you are contradicted or see a better way.