I think of you

[haymanali]

Night and day
In all my dreams

I still see you
Running toward me
With a happy secret smile
Upon your ruby lips

Under a misty drizzling rain
On a May morning

Amid sweet smells floating
Softly in the air
Through the warm springtime


I still see you
Running toward me
With a happy secret smile
Upon your ruby lips

Like a blooming white lily
And a fluttering gentle swan
With your open arms

As if you were dancing slowly
To a Hungarian song by Brahms

I still see you
Running toward me
With a happy secret smile
Upon your ruby lips

[The Walker]

i like it! :)

[haymanali]

Thanks a lot for your valuable appreciation.

[Pendragon]

I still see you
Running toward me
With a happy secret smile
Upon your ruby lips

Love this repeating stanza!

[haymanali]

Thanks a lot for your appreciation.

[Buh4Bee]

Sweet

[Silas Thorne]

I still see you
Running toward me
With a happy secret smile
Upon your ruby lips



This isn't bad, and it concludes well with this stanza, but it seems that this is all there is, and the rest seems like insipid flowery verbiage to me...but that may just be my own personal taste. The bit about the 'rainbow coloured warm springtime' makes me feel like vomiting.

[haymanali]

@ jersea

Thanks a lot.

@ Silas Thorne

Thanks for your observation. I changed it.