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DanBierce
09-27-2009, 09:25 AM
So the apples fell,
and Adam bruised easily
as the leaves first cracked.

Eve foresaw the grumbles.
The damn kids heave stones
towards the river, the birds, each other,
and she knew
there'd be days like this:

"But, at least there's seasons!"
She counters,

as the once obnoxious
snake of paradise
slithers west between her feet;
leaves the gate wide open.

Virgil
09-27-2009, 09:55 AM
Wow, that is really good Dan! Very well done. Welcome to lit net. I hope to see more of your poetry. :)

DanBierce
09-27-2009, 10:06 AM
you enjoyed, Virgil. Thanks for the welcome.

Dan

~Sophia~
09-27-2009, 04:16 PM
Wow, that is really good Dan! Very well done. Welcome to lit net. I hope to see more of your poetry. :)

I second that!

DanBierce
09-28-2009, 08:58 AM
Thanks, Virgil and Sophia. Glad the poem works well for you.