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Dark Muse
09-19-2009, 08:09 PM
Stone Angel

Such lips
to grace my skin
icing my heart
with frosty eyes

This can surely
lead only
to my demise

Breath reclining
dissipating
from my grasp

I should die
in an angels arms
angel of discord

Martyred for
soul recollections
blood upon my hands

You watch
your frozen grin
grim faced
I can only
dissent.

Pendragon
09-20-2009, 10:46 AM
Stone Angel

I should die
in an angels arms
angel of discord

Martyred for
soul recollections
blood upon my hands

You watch
your frozen grin
grim faced
I can only
dissent.As usual Muse, you have a wonderful grasp of timing and words..

Dark Muse
09-20-2009, 12:06 PM
Thank you

toni
09-20-2009, 12:19 PM
I've always been a fan, DarkMuse. Your poems never fail to inspire me.

Leera
09-21-2009, 10:28 AM
Wow this is just amazing. The depth and passion behind these lines is just great. You have a huge talent, and I love your poems! Keep up the good work =)

KryStaLitsa
09-21-2009, 11:39 AM
That's the first poem to read of you Dark Muse and I really like it!!It keeps reminding faces and situations and epic love stories...It's just wonderful!!!
Why don't you edit it?

Dark Muse
09-21-2009, 12:32 PM
Thank you all for your comments.

Edit it? I personally to think that it is in need of editing. I happy with the way it stands now.