dui
09-07-2009, 05:29 PM
The Hug
It all began, like i've imagined it over a million times in my head, with a simple hug. A simple embrace, she falls into my arms and digs into my chest, but she has no idea what effect that brings me. Her fragrance fills the air around her, and it follows her like an aura, surronding her and plunging me into enthralment. The moment she touched me, it was like electricty being erupted and transitioned through my skin. Potassium and Sodium flows in and out, carrying on the electrical pulse to my brain and telling me, this here, is the woman of my desire. My hands, in response to her head being burried into my chest, automatically flexes and curls around her back, scurrying away in her hair. As my hands plunge into her thick curls, my fingers feel the perfect harmony of warmth and softness, my hands lose themselves, transfixed with bliss. Something is wet on my chest, she sniffles and wrinkles her nose. shes upset? no shes overjoyed with me, and this makes me feel happy. i pull her in closer, and i look down. She slowly tilts her head up (SOOO CUTE) first only her forehead is available. then follows her eyes, eyes that are so beautiful covered by a glossy outer layer. her nose cuts its way from my chest, and finally i see her mouth. We stand there speaking without saying anything. No amount of words could be exchanged as efficiently as we did. By staring into each other we exchanged vows, truths, love. We had faith in each other. We trusted each other. there was no doubt anywhere. Thats when i realize...im desperately in love with this woman. her every action draw me towards her, and even now when we are not moving, not speaking, just breathing, my mind is gravitated towards hers.
please leave any comments :)
any criticism or ways i can improve my writing will be much appreciated :)
It all began, like i've imagined it over a million times in my head, with a simple hug. A simple embrace, she falls into my arms and digs into my chest, but she has no idea what effect that brings me. Her fragrance fills the air around her, and it follows her like an aura, surronding her and plunging me into enthralment. The moment she touched me, it was like electricty being erupted and transitioned through my skin. Potassium and Sodium flows in and out, carrying on the electrical pulse to my brain and telling me, this here, is the woman of my desire. My hands, in response to her head being burried into my chest, automatically flexes and curls around her back, scurrying away in her hair. As my hands plunge into her thick curls, my fingers feel the perfect harmony of warmth and softness, my hands lose themselves, transfixed with bliss. Something is wet on my chest, she sniffles and wrinkles her nose. shes upset? no shes overjoyed with me, and this makes me feel happy. i pull her in closer, and i look down. She slowly tilts her head up (SOOO CUTE) first only her forehead is available. then follows her eyes, eyes that are so beautiful covered by a glossy outer layer. her nose cuts its way from my chest, and finally i see her mouth. We stand there speaking without saying anything. No amount of words could be exchanged as efficiently as we did. By staring into each other we exchanged vows, truths, love. We had faith in each other. We trusted each other. there was no doubt anywhere. Thats when i realize...im desperately in love with this woman. her every action draw me towards her, and even now when we are not moving, not speaking, just breathing, my mind is gravitated towards hers.
please leave any comments :)
any criticism or ways i can improve my writing will be much appreciated :)