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Dark Muse
08-31-2009, 05:59 PM
Lover's Embrace

Love;
a soft breath
in midnight whispers
slipping beneath silken sheets

You;
the sun's warmth
a caressive wind
sliding over golden sands

Me;
night's embrace
a kiss in the rain
falling into Autumn leaves

Us;
winter's hush
wrapped in feathered quilts
reflections in firelight.

DanielBenoit
08-31-2009, 07:11 PM
Ahhh, I very much like the surreal use of these natural settings like "in midnight whispers", "a carresive wind" or "reflectioins in firelight." Very good.

Dark Muse
08-31-2009, 07:17 PM
Thank you

blazeofglory
09-03-2009, 10:33 AM
Lover's Embrace

Love;
a soft breath
in midnight whispers
slipping beneath silken sheets

You;
the sun's warmth
a caressive wind
sliding over golden sands

Me;
night's embrace
a kiss in the rain
falling into Autumn leaves

Us;
winter's hush
wrapped in feathered quilts
reflections in firelight.

Wonderful pieces