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AimusSage
08-20-2009, 09:31 AM
I'm just passing through
Got in the car on a straight
Accelerate
I see life's passerby's
Halfway down the road
Cruising along
Can't decelerate
Don't stop I'll still be late
I'm just passing through.
Dark Muse
08-24-2009, 07:54 PM
I really like the atmopshere of this poem. It makes me think of "On the Road"
AimusSage
08-25-2009, 03:03 AM
Thanks Dark Muse.
Left Field
08-28-2009, 11:36 PM
I like it. :)
blazeofglory
09-03-2009, 10:51 AM
I'm just passing through
Got in the car on a straight
Accelerate
I see life's passerby's
Halfway down the road
Cruising along
Can't decelerate
Don't stop I'll still be late
I'm just passing through.

really penetrating