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Dark Muse
08-17-2009, 12:58 PM
Night Reprieve

Muted fire light inspires
feeling my primal desires
walking through the forest by night
hushed in the gently kissing chill
midnight's moon pours into my will
as the trees make a haunting sight
I lay myself down on the ground
and listen to the hallow sound
taking in ritual delight.

Dirtbag
08-17-2009, 01:02 PM
I love the rhythm of it.

Amylian
08-18-2009, 04:56 AM
Wow, it has a Gothic feels to it. The sound of silence is pretty dominant and it creates an amosphere of loneliness. In fact, it looks as if your in love with being lonely in such moments rather than being with somebody. The trees, the light of the moon, the air, all of these are aiding you...

Thanks!!!

Regards,
Amylian AKA Ali Makki

Dark Muse
08-18-2009, 12:50 PM
Thank you, and yes I do love to be in the solitude of nature.