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GrassHopper-
08-16-2009, 11:04 PM
Birthday poem im going to decorate and write out for her:

The thought of you brings a few things to mind,
But mostly caring, honest, and kind...

I hoped to give you something heartfelt and nice,
Something noone can buy you at any price...
Money can buy you a softball and glove,
But money cant buy you friendship and love...

After two days of thinking I sit down on my bed,
I wrote down the rhymes that came to my head...
I finally found a present to give you that noone can buy,
This poem and our friendship thats never to die...


I picked the softball and glove line b/c thats what she does for fun. suggestions?

bluosean
08-17-2009, 04:08 PM
that poem is beautiful. If you wrote it for her I am sure that she will like to hear it.