Aspen

[Dark Muse]

Aspen

Within the winds
you shiver gracefully
a finger touch
gentle breath,
I watch you dance
awed by beauty in simplicity,
your frosty colors
so soft and muted elegantly,
you hold my gaze fixed
contemplating your
pure natural lines
trembling so,
I breathe still
in frozen wonder.

[Smoogles]

Aspen
I breathe still
in frozen wonder.

These lines are magnificent! A very nice poem of attraction, an elegant description of a waltz personified by attraction :)

[Dark Muse]

Thank you very much

[qimissung]

Very delicate and graceful...

[Amylian]

With its uttering beauty it makes you speechless. A lovely, simple poem that can make your cup of tea more delcious and tasty...

[Pendragon]

These lines are so hauntingly beautiful:

awed by beauty in simplicity,
your frosty colors
so soft and muted elegantly,

[Dark Muse]

Thank you all for your coments, glad you have enjoyed.

[blazeofglory]

Aspen

Within the winds
you shiver gracefully
a finger touch
gentle breath,
I watch you dance
awed by beauty in simplicity,
your frosty colors
so soft and muted elegantly,
you hold my gaze fixed
contemplating your
pure natural lines
trembling so,
I breathe still
in frozen wonder.

Your poems are touching!