missing you

[Delta40]

not being with you is like
a rusted oil drum stuffed with shards of glass
spicy chicken vindaloo minus the chic vindal
a toilet cistern endlessly leaking in the night
my fingertips dragging across a blackboard without fingernails

[Amylian]

Nice catch Delta, lol. Really, a toilet!? I haven't thought about that before.

[blazeofglory]

not being with you is like
a rusted oil drum stuffed with shards of glass
spicy chicken vindaloo minus the chic vindal
a toilet cistern endlessly leaking in the night
my fingertips dragging across a blackboard without fingernails


This is enigmatic.

[Delta40]

Thanks. does this flow better?

Not being with you is like
a rusty drum jammed with glass shards
ordering Chicken Vindaloo and getting Ken Loo
Leaves collecting in a trickling gutter
my nails dragging across a blackboard
without fingernails