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Biggus
08-11-2009, 06:16 AM
Each morning, we stood at the bus stop
Not together, but in proximity
Day after day, week after week
I would glance at her in admiration
But I would never speak to her
There would be an occasional nod
And sometimes a smile
I would have liked to ask her out
I had almost done so many times
But my nerve would always go
So often I formed the question in my head
But the words wouldn’t come out
I always steeled myself
For the big moment, but it never happened
Then one day
When she looked particularly alluring
I thought to myself
This time will be different
This time I have rehearsed,
Though only on the cat,
This time I will do it.
So armed with a well constructed sentence
I made my move
I took a deep breath
Turned to face her,
The sentence looping through my head
Over and over
I opened my mouth to speak
But the sentence did not appear
Instead jumbled words tumbled out
From my anxiously dry mouth,
But not in the order I intended
Some words inappropriately joined together
Giving an all together different meaning
That may have caused her to be offended
It had gone better with the cat.
I just stood there
Spouting my nervous stuttering gibberish
I thought she must think me such an idiot
And fully expected her to laugh in my face
But instead she smiled at my nervousness
And reformed the words into a sentence,
The very sentence I had rehearsed,
Spoke it back to me
And then smiling broadly, answered yes

PrinceMyshkin
08-11-2009, 11:07 AM
How wonderful when the prospect of love announces itself in such a humorous way. This reminded me of "The Proclaimers'" song "Oh, Jean":

http://www.lyricsfreak.com/p/proclaimers/oh+jean_20111483.html

Buh4Bee
08-11-2009, 08:31 PM
This was such a funny little tale with such a delightful ending. Thank God you didn't wait too long! Awesome, so do you get married?

Biggus
08-14-2009, 04:51 AM
Thank you both

PS the poem isnt about me.

blazeofglory
08-14-2009, 12:10 PM
Absorbing poem!

Buh4Bee
08-14-2009, 01:15 PM
I shouldn't have been so presumptuous!! Sorry!

The Walker
08-14-2009, 05:38 PM
Such a nice story. I'm starting to like your pen, my friend. :)

Biggus
08-19-2009, 05:57 AM
Hey no problem Jersea

Biggus
08-19-2009, 05:58 AM
Thanks Walker its appreciated