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Amylian
08-09-2009, 07:03 AM
Hey guys,
Wow, it's been so long since I've been here thanks to the summer job. I think I would be much more comfortable without working like a horse, really, being a slave to others is sure makes me sick..I will quit.


Allemande


The Resonance of thy Lullaby echoes,
Wonders along with Death and goes
On playing thy vigorous, sad tone
For mine sins, I shall with vigilance atone.

The thirst and commotion of my emotion
Bursts open the time your music uttered: “devotion”.
Carry on, play on thy Allemande and let those around
You their tears be forceful, and greatly profound,
It is thee, it is Allemande, it is thy string, and it is thy sound.


Regards,
Ali Makki AKA Amylian.

PrinceMyshkin
08-09-2009, 10:52 AM
Lovely flow to this and a beautiful worshipful tone. Thank you.

Amylian
08-15-2009, 02:18 PM
It is thee I must thank,
for thy beautiful comment, for thee, being frank.

Regards,
Amylian AKA Ali Makki

blazeofglory
08-18-2009, 12:30 PM
Deep, absorbing and penetrating.

Amylian
08-18-2009, 01:34 PM
Thanks man! I very much appreciate it.