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mazHur
08-05-2009, 06:33 PM
I Wish
by mazHur



I wish I was the little strip of cloth
that adorns your beautiful bust
runs up your 'spruce' neck
runs down your 'sandalwood' breast
Ah, the ragtag cloth of your dress
that clasps you so nearly and dearly
is endowed with a better luck than
thy unfortunate beleaguered lover!

Dark Muse
08-05-2009, 11:40 PM
Lovely imagery and quite humurus. I enjoyed reading this

blazeofglory
08-06-2009, 05:01 AM
I Wish
by mazHur



I wish I was the little strip of cloth
that adorns your beautiful bust
runs up your 'spruce' neck
runs down your 'sandalwood' breast
Ah, the ragtag cloth of your dress
that clasps you so nearly and dearly
is endowed with a better luck than
thy unfortunate beleaguered lover!

This springs from deep lover, and you are really a poet of love.

mazHur
08-18-2009, 04:33 PM
Lovely imagery and quite humurus. I enjoyed reading this

Thank you, Muse, Blaze...