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Alan McDougall
08-05-2009, 05:33 AM
This poem does not rhyme but I believe it should be posted here, if incorrectly placed please move it to where it should be

The journey of my soul

I have gone to many places walked on the great grass prairies, and steps, mountains of wonder stood at the north of Scotland with the icy North Sea blowing on my body. I saw the earth in its blue beauty and rose up. I have walked on monochrome moons and seen with mind sight blazing clouds of light and felt huge translucent beings flow through me awareness as I hovered somewhere in the deep void.

I have heard the vibrations beautiful music of the universe, as the stars blaze in glorious song praising God across vast space. My mind overcome with the beauty wept, as I then knew that each living being was an essential building block a brick that holds up the fabric of reality and existence.

Merged in blissful everlasting union with the sublime and all living beings become one “titanic cosmic mind” I felt and knew “GOD”. “I am God” “I am infinite” “I am all” yet I remain “myself”. I have seen cities of pure composite light travelled and at the speed of infinity exiting the universe until it became a tiny dot in the utter vastness and infinity of other different universes.

I have watched in breathless awe at the beauty and wonder of great beings of absolute purity who roam the great oceans of space on great gossamer wings stretching a million miles between their glittering wing tips. Were these the great messengers the Angels of God?

Then blazing into the “Super Mother Universe” I observed the awesome gold light infinite of the “Source of it all” and, could not comprehend the unimaginable beauty of the “Original Mind”, and “Original Thought” that created existence.

We sang together the music of the God that we had become, now we were indestructible energy. Strange as it would be without the eternal the eternal, "I" and the eternal "YOU" there would be nothing at all. Back then we were part of creating all that there is.

God said to me in his love, before I made the Universe I knew you Alan and I also knew every other person

This was not the end but only the beginning in the everlasting progressions of existence, we all merged in the eternal moment singing the great song of creation. We are together now back we are God and God is us, we nothing is hidden everything is possible rejoice for we are infinity eternal beautiful as we formulate a new existence more wonderful than the first

Composed by Alan McDougall

Albion
10-01-2009, 06:04 AM
Poems do not have to rhyme. They should simply be poetic as this is. Your message is clear but I don't understand all of the connections you make. Possibly typing errors (eg through me
awareness)?
May I suggest, however, that this piece would be better in verse form rather than narrative; but you may find some balancing of line length necessary.

Good example:

I have gone to many places, walked on the great grass prairies, and steps, (steppes?)
Mountains of wonder stood at the north of Scotland
With the icy North Sea blowing on my body.
I saw the earth in its blue beauty and rose up.
I have walked on monochrome moons
And seen with mind sight blazing clouds of light
And felt huge translucent beings flow through me
Awareness? as I hovered somewhere in the deep void.

MineralWater
10-03-2009, 06:42 PM
I have heard the vibrations beautiful music of the universe, as the stars blaze in glorious song praising God

I believe that could be a beautiful title actually for your poem.
As it is my understanding, that this seems to be the essence of it.