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Lyn05
08-02-2009, 07:26 AM
They say that time
Is like a circle-
It has no start, and has no end
It just goes on and on.

They say that time
Is like a fleeting dream-
Once it’s gone,
It’s never coming back.

They say that time
Waits for no man.
But I’ll be here waiting for you
For all eternity.

PrinceMyshkin
08-02-2009, 01:30 PM
Someone would have been awfully happy to receive this!

Buh4Bee
08-02-2009, 03:32 PM
Nice little poem!

mohsobhy
08-02-2009, 04:37 PM
I liked it. Thanks for this little and interesting poem.

The Walker
08-02-2009, 07:25 PM
I agree with prince.
Very nice poem :)

JWHooper
08-02-2009, 08:49 PM
Poem has a little emotional error.

FIRST OF ALL, WHY CHOOSE TIME OVER NATURE OF BUTTERFLIES SMELLING FLOWERS? Let us assume that we know the philosophical nature of time. Time does tell us that whether AM or PM, we sleep and drink beer and have fun writing poems about beautiful gardens. Please look over the poem again, and this will make sense.

Buh4Bee
08-02-2009, 10:12 PM
Check out this link:

www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=45959

Beautifull
08-02-2009, 10:14 PM
I think this is soo cute! I love it! If this is sent to your secret crush(or public) I think they would love it!!!!

Lyn05
08-03-2009, 06:44 AM
Hi everyone! Thanks so much for your wonderful comments!
And jersea, I checked out Lamar Cole's poem. Really loved it. Thanks!

Pendragon
08-04-2009, 12:22 PM
Can't add much to what has already been said except that a lot was said in a few words... Wonderful!

blazeofglory
08-05-2009, 03:14 AM
They say that time
Is like a circle-
It has no start, and has no end
It just goes on and on.

They say that time
Is like a fleeting dream-
Once it’s gone,
It’s never coming back.

They say that time
Waits for no man.
But I’ll be here waiting for you
For all eternity.

Time is nothing. and any measurement of it is an illusion, and nothing else.

It seems inset or reset by hours, days, weeks, months and the like but these are simply illusions.

We try to associate it with the sun, its movements that result in days and nights. What we call day is the absence of dark and what we call night is the absence of light. Both dark and light are illusions.