My Love

[Lamar Cole]

My love sails on blue waters.
Blue waters of your heart.
My love dances on the wind.
The wind of your soul.

My love is a true reflection.
Reflection of your eyes.
My love will live forever.
In your body and soul.

[Pryderi Agni]

Yet if you break the love of my heart,
And walk away,
My soul's ragged chain
Will seal your heart alway.

Don't mind me; I just wrote what I felt. You've a great poem here.

[JWHooper]

Lamar Cole, you have some poetic error in your poem. First of all, we humans choose such hypothetical topic to such poem. Then, let's say you chose love. Nature is about love and books, but philosophy tells us that we need to shut up sometimes and love into the sight of beauty of nature of Shakespearean nature law.

[ktm5124]

JWHooper, quit trolling.

[Buh4Bee]

It's a nice poem.

[Lyn05]

Hi Lamar Cole! This poem's great! Loved it.

[The Walker]

Great poem, love it too

[blazeofglory]

My love sails on blue waters.
Blue waters of your heart.
My love dances on the wind.
The wind of your soul.

My love is a true reflection.
Reflection of your eyes.
My love will live forever.
In your body and soul.

Of course love is something like that and dwells in the soul of the beloved.