for you

[spally]

writen by Andrew Rodriguez
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as i lay dying, i give my last breath to you
for that is the only thing i can give
if you sit here and watch me, i promise not to cry
b/c my last moments will be happy with you
as i enter the flames, i promise not to forget every moment we shared
i will miss you dearly, and remember i'll see you soon
i'm sorry for all the pain i've caused, i never meant to hurt you
please don't be sad for me, just remember i'm in a better place
just remember i loved you dearly and i'll jbe with you always

[Rachy]

That's gorgeous!

[Major Plath Fan]

that's really beautiful

[star_gazer2000]

I really like that alot. most excellent!

[SwtRose]

Spally this reminds me of one of my from my book. The poem is titled my last breath. Such a well written bittersweat poem. My only suggestion is that you have a typo. :)

i'll jbe with you always.