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Swallow
05-19-2005, 09:02 AM
WINGS OF TIME

Time is like an eagle
flying free along the coast
and white coloured seagulls
follow in the second post
in the great formation
flying where the wind will blow
feeling the vibration
of the heartbeat as it grows

Wings of time
stronger than the seasons
fly so fine
They never need no reasons

Time is just a free bird
in a universal flight
never to be heard
and sometimes out of sight
Eagle's destination
lies in living food's domain
Time flies through the ancient
spinning wheel of once again

Time is seeking comrades
on it's journey every day
All the darkest shades
will get an offer if we pray
Time is what we spend
and time flies 'round in circling rings
Any captured moment
in a lifetime has its wings

SwtRose
05-31-2005, 03:22 PM
Your words provoke such wonderful imagery, it is a very beautiful poem. A thought-provoking peice of poetry.

amuse
05-31-2005, 06:54 PM
sorry to be nitpicky; this is pretty, but did you mean to use a double negative? it seems out of place.
They never need no reasons

SwtRose
06-01-2005, 03:32 PM
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blueeyes
08-08-2005, 11:35 PM
I like the poem. Do you have anymore?