A Winter's Day

[Dark Muse]

A Winter's Day

I dream of a winter day
slumbering in powder white snow
here in the cold I will stay
I dream of a winter day
forget-me-nots in display
sweet blue blush to show
I dream of a winter day
slumbering in powder white snow.

[Helga]

I like this, mainly because I love the winter.

[Pendragon]

Absolutely fabulous use of repetition! Fantastic! :thumbs_up

[Dark Muse]

Thank you

[firefangled]

The repetition works well with forget-me-nots.

Right now in Florida it is 95 degrees. I appreciate the relief of a winter day.

[Dark Muse]

Yes I have always had a preference for winter

[Buh4Bee]

I agree, I think the repetitive structure helps to move the ideas smoothly. Love the forget me nots in a display. I love winter too and love the snow.

[Dark Muse]

Thank you, forget-me-nots are a faveorite of mine and outside of myself, they are not commonly used in poetry.

[paperleaves]

I don't know how you do it....
beautiful

[Buh4Bee]

I agree, do you ever read your stuff at a coffee shop at an open mike night? Or publish in a local paper?