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Biggus
07-21-2009, 05:23 AM
Remember when we were young
Those long halcyon days
Down on your dad’s farm
Joyful hours spent
Idling our time away.
Swinging on that old rustic gate
Roaming the countryside
Happy lazy days,
Nothing particular to do
And a world of time to do it in

They were wonderful days
They were innocent days
Before the end of childhood
Before those weeks
That special summer
So long ago
When you seemed to transform
Into something new
Like a butterfly
Emerging from its cocoon
Spreading its wings in the sun
Displaying fresh beauty

Your transformation
From the cutely naive country girl
Awkward and ungainly
Into a beautiful young woman
An altogether more graceful being
Though I was fond of the grubby faced girl
With untidy hair, wispy and uncombed
I would very soon fall in love
With the butterfly that had replace her

With the emergence of the butterfly girl
With all the beauty
Of the first flower of spring
We trod an unfamiliar path
Leaving our childish games behind
Taking our first tentative steps
Towards love

A love that was a stranger to us
Yet we stepped eagerly in to its turbulent sea
And immersed ourselves in its waters
We soon knew at once
The excitement of first love
When joy was all we could see
And all of our thoughts
Were only for each other
Sweet moments spent
In blissful adoration
Until love was burnt deeply on our souls

Now as we walk the familiar places
As we have so often done
With scenes much visited
We can stand in that spot
Where first I beheld the butterfly
Resplendent in the sunlight
And say to you
With heartfelt sincerity
That I love you still

Mortdefides
07-22-2009, 06:45 AM
Magical... The meaning of the title is unclear to me. French perhaps?!
Never mind, the poem is wonderful, filled with so many memories and joyful days with gleeful laughter and cheerful play. I adore the work, it is spellbinding. Truly amazing!

Biggus
07-22-2009, 11:11 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your comments.
The title is french for Butterfly Girl, I used the french title as I already have another poem called Butterfly Girl.

firefangled
07-22-2009, 11:28 AM
The title sets the scene for charming, which is how this reads throughout. I'm sure whomever is the inspiration for this loved it even more.

I can tell your whole heart was in this one, Biggus.

Biggus
07-29-2009, 06:07 PM
So pleased you enjoyed it.

Paul

paperleaves
07-29-2009, 08:58 PM
It is unique and humble...a breath of fresh air in the sweltering waves of love! thank you for sharing! :)

Biggus
08-07-2009, 08:35 AM
Thank you for the kind coments I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Paul

MarkBastable
08-07-2009, 08:43 AM
It's papillon actually.

PrinceMyshkin
08-07-2009, 11:06 AM
It's the unhurried flow of it that is especially enjoyable, the feeling of someone retracing - doubtless not for the first time - some beloved memories.

blazeofglory
08-07-2009, 10:28 PM
A beautiful expression of what one has in the heart.

Biggus
08-11-2009, 06:11 AM
Thanks to Mark for pointing out the typo.
Dont you just love people who will take the time to point out a mistake but cant be bothered to comment.
Thanks anyway

Biggus
08-11-2009, 06:11 AM
Thank Mysh and Blaze glad you enjoyed it

MarkBastable
08-11-2009, 08:36 AM
Thanks to Mark for pointing out the typo.
Dont you just love people who will take the time to point out a mistake but cant be bothered to comment.
Thanks anyway



It wasn't that I couldn't be bothered.

Buh4Bee
08-12-2009, 08:37 PM
This is a poem that expresses some of the sentiments of true love. So sweet and timelessly innocent.

I work on a farm in the summer and I can relate to the image of the farmer's daughter! The farmer has a daughter who will soon be growing into a beautiful young lady and there is a crew of many young men that will notice her eventually.

Haunted
08-12-2009, 08:53 PM
this is so nice... your words put me right there.

Biggus
08-14-2009, 04:44 AM
Thanks Jersea

Biggus
08-14-2009, 04:45 AM
Thanks Haunted most kind