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The Walker
07-15-2009, 09:42 PM
Walking around a crowd
I tilt my head
wondering what you have to say.

"Don't you know enough about me
as to be scared?"
You said.
I laughed because I was not.
I didn't know you enough.

"I´m scare"
Now I say,
For I had known
The dark side of your soul.

qimissung
07-16-2009, 03:38 PM
Short and elegant, Walker. I love how you bring the ending back to the beginning...and then leave us wondering and thinking. Quite a sophisticated piece of work, actually.

The Walker
07-20-2009, 04:32 PM
thanks qimissung! sophisticated sounds too much for me :D thanks!

qimissung
07-20-2009, 10:29 PM
You are quite welcome, Walker. I hope more people read this.